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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 5:00 pm 
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There was recently a feature on short short stories - six words or less.
Can anyone come up with better than this?

"See that shadow? It's not yours"

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 5:04 pm 
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 7:28 pm 
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 7:30 pm 
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this one jarred me.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 7:33 pm 
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 7:34 pm 
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 7:37 pm 
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 Post subject: short but creepy
PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 7:39 pm 
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Mahoney wrote:
this one jarred me.

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yeah, disturbing.


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Dave Toxic wrote:
Mahoney wrote:
this one jarred me.

For Sale: Baby shoes, never worn

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yeah, disturbing.


Not disturbing but sad. I assumed the shoes were bought by a couple or a woman hoping to have a child, but it never happened...

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 8:03 pm 
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Edward J. Cunningham wrote:
Dave Toxic wrote:
Mahoney wrote:
this one jarred me.

For Sale: Baby shoes, never worn

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yeah, disturbing.


Not disturbing but sad. I assumed the shoes were bought by a couple or a woman hoping to have a child, but it never happened...


I pictured the same, but specifically with a miscarriage.


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 8:18 pm 
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 9:08 pm 
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 9:36 pm 
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Dave Toxic wrote:
Edward J. Cunningham wrote:
Dave Toxic wrote:
Mahoney wrote:
this one jarred me.

For Sale: Baby shoes, never worn

-Hemingway


yeah, disturbing.


Not disturbing but sad. I assumed the shoes were bought by a couple or a woman hoping to have a child, but it never happened...


I pictured the same, but specifically with a miscarriage.


thats how i read it.

now I like to think of it that the kid grew so quickly he outgrew the shoes before wearing them. It makes me feel better that way


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 12:33 am 
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 2:03 am 
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