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DaJean
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Post subject: A rain softly falls Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 3:41 pm |
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Like the rain upon your face is the kisses upon your brow your cheek, your lips. Like a soft whispering wind the breeze caresses your face. Love lingers around your heart a whisper of promises made dreams faintly remembered. Like a rain that softly falls as the sun peeks thru the clouds. An unexpected occurance a joyful result of a faint rainbow.
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DaJean
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Post subject: A rain softly falls Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 2:51 pm |
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the wind whispers my name the soft mist kisses your cheek the sun dapples across your skin I am with you like a shadow by your side ever present ever elusive the butterfly on wing always out of reach yet always near to watch over you my hero, my knight the strength of the wind to lift my wings the beat of my heart to keep me alive you are the breath in me the warmth in my arms ever present ever elusive the light rain that softly falls in bright sunlight the clouds over the full moon you are my life my love my beloved
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DaJean
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Post subject: A rain softly falls Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 9:01 pm |
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He is standing in the half light A girl stands near all attention her eyes on him my heart breaks my breath is gone It is all my doing, cannot be undone Life will ebb out and be forever changed choices, chances and circumstances I take none of them and sand slips thru my fingers as he does I choose to never be Chance makes me know and circumstances prohibit his eyes are liquid emotion and I melt tears can fall like diamonds and yet cut as they do once the choice is made there is no going back everything is a different color dimmer somehow except when you see the briefest glimpse the flash of his smile the light in his eyes even when it is not for you nor never will be again Love does not die, then. It only changes, with the facet the turning of life. But only Love remains however painful however faintly only Love remains, Forever
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RobertSwanderson
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Post subject: A rain softly falls Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 12:24 am |
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Bigger and Better!
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Reminds me of Cummings...
somewhere i have never traveled, gladly beyond any experience, your eyes have their silence: in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me, or which i cannot touch because they are too near
your slightest look easily will unclose me though i have closed myself as fingers, you open always petal by petal myself as Spring opens (touching skillfully, mysteriously) her first rose
or if your wish be to close me, i and my life will shut very beautifully, suddenly, as when the heart of this flower imagines the snow carefully everywhere descending;
nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals the power of your intense fragility:whose texture compels me with the colour of its countries, rendering death and forever with each breathing
(i do not know what is is about you that closes and opens; only something in me understands the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses) nobody,not even the rain, has such small hands
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DaJean
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Post subject: A rain softly falls Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 1:14 am |
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thank you for that Vincent from beauty and the beast read that once one of my favorites
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RobertSwanderson
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Post subject: A rain softly falls Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 1:44 am |
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Bigger and Better!
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DaJean wrote: Vincent from beauty and the beast read that once
That's awesome.
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luelyron
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Post subject: A rain softly falls Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 12:15 pm |
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Beauty. It's a rare thing when actual lovers approach anywhere near such conscious bliss. It seems very chaste, but spiritual for that, DaJ. I don't know why it seemed to call for promise unfulfilled in this life, early on, but it did. Reminds me of some ineffable sensation, almost too fragile or ethereal for this world; but it can be known, just rarely recognized in such language once a relationship is subject to work and partnership. My words are inadequate, not meant as an exhaustive treatment; I just wanted you to know for sure it's read and appreciated.
_________________ http://ceaseill.blogspot.com/ There's always writing left.
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DaJean
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Post subject: A rain softly falls Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:21 am |
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Thank you for all your words
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